Critical Self-Reflection of Comments

Comment 1: https://aimeestarcollector.wordpress.com/2019/08/15/full-frontal-fury/

For this comment, I gave some positive feedback as well as some constructive criticism on ways in which she could have improved on the pitch video. I also provided a journal article which could be used towards her further research into the topic.

Comment 2: https://lusuey.home.blog/2019/08/16/the-underappreciated-impact-of-indie-narrative-games/

For this comment, I gave positive feedback especially for the pitch video and only a small constructive criticism for their blog post. I also gave them a journal article which I research that may be helpful towards their topic.

Comment 3: https://ps797297878.wordpress.com/2019/08/15/dont-mess-with-me-i-have-the-power-of-merch-and-cosplay-on-my-side/

For this comment, I gave a lot of constructive criticism on ways in which she can go about her digital artefact and some key requirements she had missed out on in her pitch. I also provided a blog post which I found through research that may help with her project.

Self Reflection of Comments 

When undertaking some feedback for…