For this comment, I gave some positive feedback as well as some constructive criticism on ways in which she could have improved on the pitch video. I also provided a journal article which could be used towards her further research into the topic.
For this comment, I gave positive feedback especially for the pitch video and only a small constructive criticism for their blog post. I also gave them a journal article which I research that may be helpful towards their topic.
For this comment, I gave a lot of constructive criticism on ways in which she can go about her digital artefact and some key requirements she had missed out on in her pitch. I also provided a blog post which I found through research that may help with her project.
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