Feedback: Pitch Commenting


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Initially I found commenting on my fellow classmates pitches slightly confronting as the topics they were discussing were not exactly areas in which I was familiar with or could really comment on too well. However, I thought they all really executed their ideas very well and all three of them made their pitch so clear that even I someone who was not very familiar with cosplay or indie game narrative could still comprehend. I found critiquing quite difficult for these three pitches I was reviewing as there was not much improvement to suggest at all! Each had great, clear structure and communicated their ideas very well.

One of the main points of focus I found myself repeating through each comment was suggestions for audience engagement. Although I came to the conclusion that there was no need for improvement I thought a main point of assistance or feedback I could give…

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