Critical Self-Reflection & Feedback

Stephanie (Steff) Harris

Pitch:https://notsteffharris.wordpress.com/2019/08/16/the-role-of-females-in-grand-theft-auto/

Feedback:https://notsteffharris.wordpress.com/2019/08/16/the-role-of-females-in-grand-theft-auto/comment-page-1/?unapproved=150&moderation-hash=d49a51cd9f4335c00d8efd6ebdb61e50#comment-150

Steff is planning on utilising a variety of online platforms including blog posts and podcasts to learn and gain an opinion of the role female characters in Grand Theft Auto.

I gave a variety of comments and ideas in how she would be able to further define her DA. Steff had a very thorough understanding of the topic and undergone a lot of research to ensure her pitch was well presented. I believe my feedback was beneficial to Steff’s progression of her DA, due to an interest and understanding of the stated topic, as well as the further research I was able to provide which looks at a variety of views on the topic.

Overall, I believe I could have been more critical and succinct in my feedback instead of providing open ended ideas and questions.

Kiana Paige

Pitch:https://kianaspaige.wordpress.com/2019/08/16/going-afk/

Feedback: https://kianaspaige.wordpress.com/2019/08/16/going-afk/comment-page-1/?unapproved=132&moderation-hash=f3a0e3b9886d25841042790e2db9e831#comment-132 AND