The approach I take to analyse other people’s DA pitches begins with me looking at their motivation or inspiration to cover their topic. This means observing their video and accompanying blog post, looking for reasons they give for deciding to do their artefact, and particular parts of this content that they seem to talk about with the most passion and often times knowledge.
This was a constant theme in my comments, as I targeted a specific part of their proposal and offered a way that it could be approached that is very intriguing to the audience. Firstly, with Anh’s pitch on fangirls in Esports and Tsports (blog post can be found here), I offered the possibility of taking a more targeted approach on the representation of women in Esports and traditional sports (something she herself had referenced being her main inspiration) as her initial idea of just adding to the…
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