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Hello and welcome to another episode of comment review.

Paris – Minecraft VS Fortnite ~ A TeenageAddiction

Paris’ project is focuses on the link between gaming addiction and two popular games Fortnite and Minecraft. In my comment I suggested that she should narrow her focus heavily on the psychological links & aspects of gaming and addiction. In conjunction with this I also provided some extra scholarly sources to help progress her research into the psychological links between gaming addiction and popularised games.

Furthermore, as Paris never quite specified who her audience was, I encouraged her to do some more research into her specified target audience, as “the more niche the better”. I hope this advice will assist with her feedback loop, hopefully her project will progress further and get more traction from a niche audience. I also suggested that Paris maximise her user feedback, by posting her project into relevant…