After uploading our pitch blogs, it was time to receive feedback and give feedback on fellow peers pitches and digital artifact ideas. This blog post will highlight the feedback comments I made to 3 other blogs and a summary of what feedback I received for my pitch.
When leaving my comments on my peer’s I always tried to provide an academic source and give them suggestions that I think will help drive their project forward and help fill in gaps within their project. I also planned on looking at the positives more than the negatives.
My First comment was on Julia’s Blog Post. She said her DA will be about the relationships between games and cinema expressed by the technology of BR. I gave her the suggestion of maybe trying to elaborate more on the gaming side of VR as from it pitches it mostly sounded like the focus…
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