So Long and Thanks For All the Tips

Lusuey

In relation to my own pitch I was required to comment on the posts of three other pitches and self-reflect on how effectively these comments contributed to each pitch.

Pitch 1 – Full Frontal Fury by Aimee

Summary – This pitch discusses both sides of the argument in which cartoonish graphics changes how one approaches violence in video games. Specifically focusing on the analysis of Crash Bandicoot and Ratchet & Clank.

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You did a really good job at making your pitch video dynamic and energetic through the use of music, images and backgrounds, which made it very enjoyable to watch. It was also concise and straight to the point, which was emphasised through the titles, making your points clear and the centre of our attention. However I would improve this by expanding on each of these points either through speaking or dot-points (although I would encourage the former)…

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