Critical Self-Reflection of Comments

The first post:

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The second post

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The third post

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What did I do:

I read those post carefully on account of the attractive and innovative topic. In the first and second post, I suggest them to narrow down the range of their research. In the third post, I suggest the blogger to change the font for the aim of articstic and structured.

What did I learn and how to improve:

I found my DA pitch has same imperfections. First, I should provide the format and present the content of the contextual essay.  Secondly, my DA topic should be more specific.

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