Comment on Caitlin Olsen’s Blog and Pitch 

Link to my comment on Caitlin’s blog: https://caitlinolsen.wordpress.com/2019/08/12/digital-artefact-project-pitch/

Comment on Elissa Rhode’s Blog and Pitch 

Link to my comment on Elissa’s Blog: https://welcometoelissasblog.wordpress.com/2019/08/16/how-does-negative-public-relations-impact-the-gaming-industry-2/

Comment on Isaac Percy’s Blog and Pitch 

Link to my comment on Isaac’s Blog: https://isaacpercy.com/2019/08/16/press-start/

Critical Self-Reflection of my Comments 

With this assessment, we were required to comment on three individual’s blogs and provide them with extensive feedback on their digital artefact video pitches and blogs. The feedback and iteration cycle is critical as it permits one to take on board the feedback and apply it to their future projects for improvement. Using the marking criteria as a guide to how I can construct my feedback, I structured my comments into two segments: pitch and blog. I did this so it’s clearer for the individual to know what I was giving feedback on. I also ensured my commentary was constructive and…