As a creative writing student, I’d hope I’m good at giving constructive criticism by now, but I’ve never had to give feedback on video pitches before. This post explores my experience with this and how I think I did and how I hope to improve when giving feedback in the future
Jack Kelly
Jack Kelly’s DA pitch and blog post focuses on a really
relevant topic for today’s society: Do physical copies of video games have a
future or will the gaming industry be dominated by digital copies of games.
For feedback, I started with positive comments on the pitch
followed with things I thought could be approved. I wrote about the clarity of
the pitch and how I wasn’t confused about the topic at any point. The criticism
I gave was to expand on talking about the media format Jack plans to use, as I
felt it was a…
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