How to be constructive & helpful? – A self-reflection

For this particular subject – Game Media, we were asked to comment on others’ blogs and to reflect on our commentary performance. With this blog demonstrates my contributions through my comments and discussed how can I improve my feedback in order to help my peers learn better.

The comments 

Mikayla’s pitch about ‘The female Twitch experience’ has a clear content structure and thorough engagement with the relevant information from both mainstream media and academic field. I have pinpointed interesting arguments in my comments and provided her with additional sources which would help her to elaborate, expand such arguments. The recommended sources include a case study of a female streamer and related information from our own lecture content. Concerning that the scope of research can be too broad, I also suggested narrowing it down.

For Britt’s blog concerning the stereotypes in games, I noticed the inconsistency in the way she…