In this comment I established what i thought worked well within her video pitch and blog post, as well as letting the OP know what I though could’ve been improved on
In this comment I mentioned what was effective as well as what was ineffective with their video and blog post. I also link a document relating to their topic, and a game that would be relevant in their topic analysis as well.
In this comment I mentioned some things that had confused me about their video pitch as well as possible solutions for it. In the blog post section I wrote about what I thought worked well within their post.
Within my comments I wanted to let my peers know both about what I thought worked within their pitches and what I thought could be improved on. I…
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