Within this second round of comments, we had to give helpful feedback on three peer’s project beta’s.
I found the second round of comments, easier to conduct then the first as I knew what I needed to improve on and what sort of feedback I should be giving. For each comment I aimed to suggest one popular news source, along with one academic source, as I did not do this in the project pitch comments and wanted to improve. I aimed to write more in this round of comments and provide more direction.
My first comment was on Ricky’s digital artefact which explores the impact that game music has on players. My comment (image below), aimed to be helpful and provide insights such as giving his audience a quick recap of what his project is first, before jumping straight in. This will allow the audience to understand what is going…
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