How Can A Non-Gamer Possibly Help with Video Game Projects? > Part 2

SOPHIE LEATHERS

The following is feedback on my peers digital artefacts, as well as a critical self reflection on my comments. These digital artefacts have all made great progression and have a clear path ahead. I am interested to see how each peer continues to develop their projects!

Beta 1 – Paris

Within my feedback on Paris’s Beta Pitch, I have attempted to provide actionable suggestions. I have previously suggested some topics and other areas for Paris to explore, but with the great progress and clear path on her DA. So this time I have given more specific feedback to the changes she has made and the sources she has mentioned.

I have kept the feedback more brief this time, as I wanted Paris to be able to engage and interact with the feedback. By offering a YouTube source, I feel that this was more effective as Paris has already identified an…

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