Within this comment I let the OP know what I thought worked and what didn’t work within their video and blog post. I also linked a article that I thought would be relevant to their digital artifact. As it talks about a different angle they could take when looking at their topic.
Within this comment I listed a article that’s related directly to their topic of using minecraft in education. I also listed some things I thought could be improved within the video.
In this comment I listed what I thought could have been improved within their video. However I couldn’t find anything they hadn’t already referenced and researched within their blog post. The OP has clearly done their research and has a very good idea of how to proceed with their DA.
Within my comments I wanted…
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