After posting my own BETA video and blog post, I watched/read three others created by fellow students. In this blog post I will explain the comments I made to my colleagues regarding their work and then examine how I have improved from the last round of feedback. Additionally, I will discuss what I can take away from the feedback I gave and how I can use that to improve in future subjects that require giving feedback.
Summary: Examining participatory media through mod packs, level/map creation and machinima (user generated from popular games) through Fortnite.
To begin with, I acknowledged the fact that Stephen drew directly from class content with his idea: participatory culture. I suggested he strengthen the use of this by including ideas and quotes from the reading of that week to draw on. Additionally, I suggested some improvements to the video itself in order to make…
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