Overview of pitch:
Blog posts and a short YouTube video on the role that female characters play in GTA
Based on my initial critical reflection on comments I wanted to ensure that I became more involved in providing links that would directly assist the issues that the developer was enduring. Therefore in this comment I took time to research links, one that was broader and carried a wide variety of relevance across multiple game examples and one link that was more specific, the wiki link, even though it is wikipedia, has plenty of hyperlinks to higher quality sources.
I also made mention to including a timeline of iterations, in this round of comments I wanted to ensure that instead of only mentioning any issue I have found or an improvement that could be made, I also wanted to ensure that I provided a solution.
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