In the process of working on my Beta I am required to engage in other students’ digital artefacts – providing them with feedback, suggestions and potential sources; essentially creating a feedback loop. For this task I must engage with three students’ Beta posts and share what I believe they did well, what they could improve on, provide any additional sources that might be relevant to their DA and then suggest any potential directions they could take their research.
My first comment was on Emma’s digital artefact, which is looking at the underrepresentation of females in video games. I first of all wanted to share the aspects of her Beta video/ blog she did well such as the structure of her video and her ability to write a very engaging yet concise post – basing this feedback on the marking criteria. I then shared with her a suggestion she…
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