Contribution comments

Here are my three comments I made in contribution to other peoples studies and a little explanation as to why I think they are good comments.

First Up

Lydia McGaheys Beta

My comment to Lydia was both warm and interesting and her blog sort of related to what my DA is about so it was good to almost be able to share some relevant research to both her and my topic. I also shared some information which I think she might find both relevant and useful. Adding this to the project allows Lydia to critically analyse her work and refine her audience whether that be done In categories reflecting on age groups, or referring to different games, either would benefit her research I believe.

Second Up

Tegans Blog

Again I think this response to the BETA video is both constructive and positive whilst also giving ideas on how to…