This time around peer reviewing was a little easier than the first one, as people have a more concrete idea on what they have been doing and how they have been doing it. Therefore, I could only a give a few suggestions which were more helpful for the future of their DA’s after the subject finishes.
Beta #1: Taylor’s THE MUSICALITY OF VIDEOGAMES
Taylor’s initial pitch actually drew me in from the start with the idea and emphasis on music in video games. To which expanded my thinking on what my own DA could truly be in the first place, narrowing in on certain aspects or communities of the game rather than just a game in itself. Once again, Taylor nailed the visual components and used the framework of nostalgia to her advantage to which I jumped upon with my experience with that and a very helpful website.
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