BCM325 – PEER COMMENTARY

Since beginning this subject, I have read many pitch ideas as well as made my own pitch. Through commenting on different people’s pitches, it not only had the potential to aid them but also excelled my own knowledge on what I can do to my pitch to further escalate my results.

The first pitch I commented on was Jess’s. Jessica had such an amazing pitch idea surrounding really poignant subject right now – Climate change.

I really enjoyed examining her pitch and found there was so much she could do with her digital artefact idea, which lead me to thinking about how my own digital artefact can vary and expand into to so much more as well. I recommended a factual website for Jess, full of facts that would blow her audience away if she chose to incorporate them.

The next pitch I commented on was Hannah’s, Hannah has…

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